speed reduces as march silently approach from unseen corner of the empty streets. liveliness sipped through time n turned into draining dullness. with the lose window flapping against its tilts n skipping rhythmically every now n then, the crows sang along crying deafeningly on the rooftops. adding to the grayish street lights, people strolling alongside like some mindless zombies n stringed puppets, with the wind blowing in their face, mercilessly.
Sunday, February 22, 2009
Gray.
speed reduces as march silently approach from unseen corner of the empty streets. liveliness sipped through time n turned into draining dullness. with the lose window flapping against its tilts n skipping rhythmically every now n then, the crows sang along crying deafeningly on the rooftops. adding to the grayish street lights, people strolling alongside like some mindless zombies n stringed puppets, with the wind blowing in their face, mercilessly.
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Wow, that is a great illustration!!! I love the way you wrote the passage!!!
ReplyDeleteHi levian. Dropping by. :D
ReplyDeleteakira: thanks! you can finally understand my writings i hope? :p
ReplyDeletejl: hi jl, thanks! :)
aiyoh...how come the doll eyes look so scary one.
ReplyDeletewah u went jogging in the morning...i did not go cause still at melaka ler...
i hardly have supper one for quite some time...but recently dunno why feel so hungry most of the nights.
vialentino: i guess you didn't read my replies from the previous posts that i wasn't from kl. :p
ReplyDeleteit takes creativity to play and paint with the language. i'm certainly not good in it.
ReplyDeletelife ramblings: i myself is also an amateur at it, improving along the way comparing to what i wrote back then. :)
ReplyDeletePlay and paint? That's new to me. No wonder you are always writing like that : )
ReplyDeleteI can feel the "gray" colour inside... XD
ReplyDeletefoongpc: i hope it hasn't given you any trouble in understanding. another reason is keeping the anonymity. it's fun! :D
ReplyDeleteakira: i'm glad the attempt was a success. hopefully it's not because of the word "grayish" that i'd included. :p
Hehe, how about try another colour? Hmm, maybe pink? I wanna see the effects! XD
ReplyDeleteakira: pink eh, i'll try. but i've gotta say it'll be a challenge, will be digging for more ideas n images in my head while i'm at it. :D
ReplyDeleteYeah, then I shall see the atmosphere for the pinky ya! XD
ReplyDeleteakira: i wonder how it will turned out. :p
ReplyDeleteHmm, maybe like the way of Pink Panther? XD
ReplyDeleteakira: i .. don't think that'll be the way i want it to be. :p
ReplyDeleteHaha, take your time and write it up ya!
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