
speed reduces as march silently approach from unseen corner of the empty streets. liveliness sipped through time n turned into draining dullness. with the lose window flapping against its tilts n skipping rhythmically every now n then, the crows sang along crying deafeningly on the rooftops. adding to the grayish street lights, people strolling alongside like some mindless zombies n stringed puppets, with the wind blowing in their face, mercilessly.
Wow, that is a great illustration!!! I love the way you wrote the passage!!!
ReplyDeleteHi levian. Dropping by. :D
ReplyDeleteakira: thanks! you can finally understand my writings i hope? :p
ReplyDeletejl: hi jl, thanks! :)
aiyoh...how come the doll eyes look so scary one.
ReplyDeletewah u went jogging in the morning...i did not go cause still at melaka ler...
i hardly have supper one for quite some time...but recently dunno why feel so hungry most of the nights.
vialentino: i guess you didn't read my replies from the previous posts that i wasn't from kl. :p
ReplyDeleteit takes creativity to play and paint with the language. i'm certainly not good in it.
ReplyDeletelife ramblings: i myself is also an amateur at it, improving along the way comparing to what i wrote back then. :)
ReplyDeletePlay and paint? That's new to me. No wonder you are always writing like that : )
ReplyDeleteI can feel the "gray" colour inside... XD
ReplyDeletefoongpc: i hope it hasn't given you any trouble in understanding. another reason is keeping the anonymity. it's fun! :D
ReplyDeleteakira: i'm glad the attempt was a success. hopefully it's not because of the word "grayish" that i'd included. :p
Hehe, how about try another colour? Hmm, maybe pink? I wanna see the effects! XD
ReplyDeleteakira: pink eh, i'll try. but i've gotta say it'll be a challenge, will be digging for more ideas n images in my head while i'm at it. :D
ReplyDeleteYeah, then I shall see the atmosphere for the pinky ya! XD
ReplyDeleteakira: i wonder how it will turned out. :p
ReplyDeleteHmm, maybe like the way of Pink Panther? XD
ReplyDeleteakira: i .. don't think that'll be the way i want it to be. :p
ReplyDeleteHaha, take your time and write it up ya!
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