Sunday, February 22, 2009

Gray.

Doll (Picture)

speed reduces as march silently approach from unseen corner of the empty streets. liveliness sipped through time n turned into draining dullness. with the lose window flapping against its tilts n skipping rhythmically every now n then, the crows sang along crying deafeningly on the rooftops. adding to the grayish street lights, people strolling alongside like some mindless zombies n stringed puppets, with the wind blowing in their face, mercilessly.

17 comments :

  1. Wow, that is a great illustration!!! I love the way you wrote the passage!!!

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  2. Hi levian. Dropping by. :D

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  3. akira: thanks! you can finally understand my writings i hope? :p

    jl: hi jl, thanks! :)

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  4. aiyoh...how come the doll eyes look so scary one.

    wah u went jogging in the morning...i did not go cause still at melaka ler...

    i hardly have supper one for quite some time...but recently dunno why feel so hungry most of the nights.

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  5. vialentino: i guess you didn't read my replies from the previous posts that i wasn't from kl. :p

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  6. it takes creativity to play and paint with the language. i'm certainly not good in it.

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  7. life ramblings: i myself is also an amateur at it, improving along the way comparing to what i wrote back then. :)

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  8. Play and paint? That's new to me. No wonder you are always writing like that : )

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  9. I can feel the "gray" colour inside... XD

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  10. foongpc: i hope it hasn't given you any trouble in understanding. another reason is keeping the anonymity. it's fun! :D

    akira: i'm glad the attempt was a success. hopefully it's not because of the word "grayish" that i'd included. :p

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  11. Hehe, how about try another colour? Hmm, maybe pink? I wanna see the effects! XD

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  12. akira: pink eh, i'll try. but i've gotta say it'll be a challenge, will be digging for more ideas n images in my head while i'm at it. :D

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  13. Yeah, then I shall see the atmosphere for the pinky ya! XD

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  14. akira: i wonder how it will turned out. :p

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  15. Hmm, maybe like the way of Pink Panther? XD

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  16. akira: i .. don't think that'll be the way i want it to be. :p

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  17. Haha, take your time and write it up ya!

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