Tuesday, October 05, 2010

Affliction.

Doll

"no!" she whispered, voice suddenly hoarse. she had never heard him like that. he had done nothing to threaten her, yet nothing could have forced her to move pass him. she didn't know what in the world he was talking about, but the coldness of his words made her bones ache. shuddered, her stomach cramped, pulsed against her inside.

3 comments :

  1. In other words, he is making her feel rather insecure?

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  2. I think she need to asked he what is the real problem here before the matter become more worse? Communication is the most important thing for couple.

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  3. tekkaus:
    nice going there, you feel it completely!

    zezebel:
    it definitely is! no worries, this is just another fiction of mine.

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