the air smelled of dampness, the wind icy cold against her moisten skin. she didn't know why seeing it in broad daylight made it worst. always too eerie to swallow, never fail to turn her inside. night softens it, made it less real. she appreciated the darkness, throwing everything into black n white.
You're very good with putting emotions into words with just a few sentences. I always have to read them at least twice to grasp the meaning.
ReplyDeleteHmm, did something averse you?
ReplyDeleterosebelle:
ReplyDeletethanks! hopefully you enjoy reading them as much as me writing them. :)
akira:
this is fiction. :)
Sound like another sequel to twilight movies. Is that doll for real? Or you make up it to look like that?
ReplyDeleteSo night is her time lar? She is nocturnal. :p
ReplyDeleteit'slike a mysterious appearance when the darkness falls
ReplyDeletezezebel:
ReplyDeletei found the photograph online. would love to own the dolls myself though!
tekkau:
haha, nice imagination there. it was actually just a thing that she didn't like to see in broad daylight, for too much details.
ayie:
darkness cover the eeriness of that particular thing. which is exactly the way she preferred.